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A 22 year-old student was rushed to hospital on Friday night after a fire left him in critical condition.
Anoop Saha Panigrahi, second year chemisty student at Berhampur University in Orissa, India, was rushed to Maharaja Krishna Chandra Gajapati Hospital, late friday night after experiencing life threatening injuries due to a fire he had lit during a power failure.
Anoop Saha was found on the Berhampur University Laboratory floor after collapsing....
ideas to finish it off would be highly appreciated, as well as some constructive criticism
it is pretty good, but all those big words throw me off and its hard to actually want to read it with those big names all piled up. i dont know if u should put "anoop sasha was found" after all of that maybe before the 2 paragraph . and it really doesnt matter how long she was a student. sasha was found in the lab and rushed to the hospital with life threating injuries.
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